Friday, July 12, 2013

Potaua, Rocky, Jabez, Wyatt FairyTale trailer

Wyatt, Rocky, Jabez & Potaua from Team 5 PES on Vimeo.

Use this template to construct a reflection about your week making your Fairytale Move.
Post this table on your blog.
The good things about this week was we got to make our own FairyTale trailer.
The not so great things was distractions from others.
The most interesting thing was we kept staying on task.

P - Positive - The good things
M - Minus - The not so great things
I - Interesting - The things I learnt and I can do better on next time.

Monday, July 8, 2013



Once upon a time, there was a King and a Queen who lived in a mansion far far in GI. One day the queen was ill and there was no cure treatment. A few days had passed by when the guards found a mysterious box full of panadol tablets. It was a treatment to help the Queen and her baby to survive.

“It’s a GIRL” shouted the King as tears rushed down his cheeks. She had very fine blonde hair. They named her Rapunzel. A year passed by, the baby started getting neglected. One night an evil and old bald witch had seen the cute baby sleeping. She broke the window, then snatched the baby right out of the cot. She took the baby and raised her as her own.

As years went by, Rapunzel grew older and became a teenager. The witch locked her up in a tall sky-tower. The witch made money off of the magical hair of rapunzel and the witch became rich and famous.

Meanwhile at the mansion the queen and king finally cared about Rapunzel. They updated a status on facebook and sent messages to all the royal family and the village . Being rewarded money to who could find and return Rapunzel alive. Everyone rounded up a group to find Rapunzel.

There is a charming prince named Mando who wanted to find Rapunzel by himself. He found the Sky Tower and Shouted “Rapunzel Rapunzel, are you there?” Rapunzel didn’t reply. He decided to go and find her. But the witch had a wicked plan. She had hidden in the closet and waited for Mando to come in.

Entering the room, I see nothing but darkness, all I could hear was the mumble of someone who had been taped across the mouth. It was Rapunzel, I went to follow the sound of her voice so I can untie her, when the lights flashed on. Popping out of the closet, unexpectedly the witch came out and tied him up.

“Help Help” cried Rapunzel. Begging for help the witch walked up to rapunzel wanting to give her a beating of a lifetime. Luckily, Mando had a knife on him. He had cut loose and freed Rapunzel.

They managed to escape but the witch had freed her hounds.
Running for their lives, Rapunzel tripped over the log. Looks to be that she had broken her leg. But the prince  remembered he had swiss army knife, as he saw the witch coming closer to hurt her. he pulled his knife”Swish” He cut Rapunzels hair,the witch slowly turned into dust and they lived happily ever after THE END.

Monday, July 1, 2013

Spoken Word

Today Joshua Iosefo came in to room 21 and talked to us about Spoken Word.
He says that everybody's voice is valuable and there's no limit to writing.Today I talked about Yr 7/8 school rules.
School rules are affecting everybody in yr 7/8 because we are getting in trouble for certain things. Mostly little things like shoes, bubble gum, tapping/drumming , and a lot more. The most important rule is attitude and behaviour it can get you in a lot of trouble. The most boring of all is being late for school. Our senior block starts school at 8:30 am and if we come 5 minutes late we get a detention. Only if we have a reasonable explanation we get let off.